OT: Looking for your "usual honest" opinion

[Jose Lerebours]

No need to be sorry, I did ask for honest opinion  ;-) thank you for that!

OK - Will drop the 100% and just keep to pointers.

I did not check the "mobile" in normal (vertical) layout, I am in the 
habit of
flipping my phone so it shows well that way.  I will make the CSS 
changes ...

Per garage reference, well, it is more like my home office  ;-) I am 
learning how
to deal with images and creating videos and I must admit, I am no 
marketing genius  lol
(most will argue that I am not a genius period!)  but I find this very 
entertaining ...

I will edit the two images and remove the background so that they are 
transparent vectors,
this should reduce the color collision.

Oh, this is not meant to be used as a "web page", it is intended as an 
"email" campaign so,
modern browsing characteristics are not needed, other than, of course, 
the ability to read it in the
cell phones since almost everyone now reads email in their mobile devices.

Thanks,


On 5/19/21 12:50 PM, Fairlight via Filepro-list wrote:
> Honest advice?  The early 2000s called, and want their web format back.
>
> It's not responsive layout, it's a huge waste of screen real estate, and
> it looks dated.
>
> The colour scheme does a good job of being just non-uniform enough to
> annoy.
>
> You're mixing photographic and illustrated images, which clashes.
>
> Everything about it screams 'unprofessional garage operation', and is at
> direct odds with something claiming to be modern and cloud based.
>
> Also, never fucking say, "100% Secured."  Dear, sweet mother of all
> that's good and holy, have you learned nothing in the last how many
> decades?  Nothing is ever 100% anything.  Best you're getting is around
> five nines.  If I see someone say 100% in the context of anything except
> 'unsure', I know it's a lie, either out of ignorance, or deception.
> Both are bad, and instant no-fly zones.  Your '100%' security in the
> cloud goes out the window the millisecond a zero-day vulnerability isn't
> patched; your entire claim then becomes a giant lie.  There are also
> things you may not even know about -now-.  You can't say 100% with a
> straight face.  Nobody can.  -I- can't do it, and I have done security
> professionaly since 1995.  Of course, I've done enough of it to know I
> can't say that, and that nobody honestly can.
>
> It needs work.
>
> My suggestion, besides losing the 100% language, is to revise this with
> a consistent look, under a responsive Wordpress theme.  It's at least
> going to look modern enough to keep people from bailing before they even
> read the text.
>
> Sorry, but you did actively solicit the feedback.
>
> mark->
>
>
> On Tue, May 18, 2021 at 10:13:26PM -0400, Jose Lerebours via Filepro-list thus spoke:
>> No, it is not - My filePro based application has been entrusted to David
>> Duff and if not through him,
>> I will not do a thing with it.
>>
>> I am just seeking for "some advise / pointers" on the impact or lack there
>> of the promo material
>> may have if one were to receive it.
>>
>> BTW: My filePro application has most of those modules, my cloud based app is
>> actually based on
>> what I had written in filePro.
>>
>>
>> On 5/18/21 9:52 PM, Fairlight via Filepro-list wrote:
>>> Is this filePro-based?
>>>
>>> m->
>>>
>>>
>>> On Tue, May 18, 2021 at 08:07:57PM -0400, Jose Lerebours via Filepro-list thus spoke:
>>>> I am about to start marketing my Cloud Based Application and I have this
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> https://www.asisuites.com/promo/asisuites/emailPromo.html
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> I fear to say too much more than I fear not saying enough ... :-(
>>>>
>>>> They say that if one does not capture reader interest in 3 seconds, they
>>>> will not read rest of
>>>> content - Hell, I have so much to say I do not even know where to start.
>>>>
>>>> I am working on some presenter videos for social media as well ...
>>>>
>>>> Your input/advise/criticism will be greatly appreciated.
>>>>
>>>> Regards,
>>>>
>>>>
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