OT: Looking for your "usual honest" opinion

[Jose Lerebours]

I am about to start marketing my Cloud Based Application and I have this


https://www.asisuites.com/promo/asisuites/emailPromo.html


I fear to say too much more than I fear not saying enough ... :-(

They say that if one does not capture reader interest in 3 seconds, they 
will not read rest of
content - Hell, I have so much to say I do not even know where to start.

I am working on some presenter videos for social media as well ...

Your input/advise/criticism will be greatly appreciated.

Regards,


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