OT: WhyILoveTiVo.com contest

[Walter D Vaughan Jr]

Sorry about the late feedback...
1) you are right about the Dr. Who audio, probably doesn't fall under fair
use. YouTube will bounce it now or later.
2) I would have zoomed in to the TiVo logo where you have the static shot
3) The lightings kinda weird/flat. If you have Adobe PremierePro or the like
I would light the kids more and darken the edges
3a) If you could have trucked right with the camera in a curve that would
have been great for the kids.
3b) having the remote control pop out, zoom into it while going slo-mo would
be awesome.
4) with the 50's shot I would have moved the center of movement to the
screen 
4a) you only have three kids in the 50's shot 
5) So glad you didn't put a worn out film filter on it.
6) Not a big fan of the 4 bullet ending unless it fits in a rhythm with the
rest of the video. (Like each measure of the video had four beats)
7) Wrestling with the amount of black you are using.
8) The dove at the end has a lot of meaning to certain groups. I always try
to steer clear of symbolism cause you never know who will miss interpret, or
put on their "I'm offended hat".

> -----Original Message-----
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> bounces+wvaughan=steelerubber.com at lists.celestial.com] On Behalf Of
> Kenneth Brody
> Sent: Friday, April 11, 2014 5:33 PM
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> Subject: Re: OT: WhyILoveTiVo.com contest
> 
> On 4/10/2014 10:42 PM, Kenneth Brody wrote:
> > TiVo is running a "Why I Love TiVo" contest.  We have uploaded the
> > current version of our video to YouTube for comments.  Please look it
> > over if you can and send us any constructive criticism you may have.
> [...]
> 
> Here's the link to our final version of the video on the contest page:
> 
>      http://whyilovetivo.com/stories/84266382
> 
> Whether or not the "Doctor Who" audio clip will be a problem remains to be
> seen.
> 
> If you like it, vote for it.
> 
> If you don't like it... well... there's no accounting for taste.  :-)
> 
> --
> Kenneth Brody
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